Avid reader, blogger, compulsive one-clicker, genre-omnivore.
The. Pacing. Is. Really. Slow!
Not much has actually happened in 130 pages, and so far there has been no two people in bed together (nor three or more!)...
The language is a little strange, like it's English but to try to make it seem different the syntax is a little off. Not sure if this is done on purpose.